Anyways, what I m going to publish next has got an interesting incident attached to it.
As a first year student of MBA I participated in "ANTAKSHRI" in my insti. My team has to sing as many songs as possible having the word "NAZAR". We tried but couldn't make it to next round. When I came back to hostel I thought why not write a song/poem/gazal, whatever u call it, which will contain a lot of "Nazar" words.And I came up with the following.(This one is light compared to the previous one)
"नज़र"
मेरी नज़र ने तेरी नज़र से,सवाल पूछा है आज फिर से।
मेरी नज़र से फिर आज मिल के।
कैसे बताएं है कितना मुश्किल ,
नज़र मिलाना भी अब तो तुम से। ....२
मेरी नज़र ने तेरी नज़र से.........................
है देखो दुनिया बड़ी ही ज़ालिम ,
छिपा सकेंगे ना तुमको इससे।
तुम्ही बताओ कैसे कह दें ,
हो रौशनी तुम मेरी नज़र के।
है दर्द कितना मेरे जिगर में ,
कभी तो देखो मेरी नज़र से।........२
मेरी नज़र ने तेरी नज़र से.........................
कहो ना कुछ भी भले ही हमसे ,
ज़वाब दे दो तेरी नज़र से...................
जवाब दे दो ..............................
Waiting for your comments .
3 comments:
Awesome work again done by Amit Jain. I must say, the way you have incorporated "nazar" everywhr, it is just perfect.
Keep up the good work!
hey amit......u ve brought back d old memories....i too participated in that antakshari competetion.....well i should say that its a nice way to come out with something fruitful....u guyz couldnt find many songs with the word nazar....but anyways it helped u to pen down a beautiful poem....thats the spirit !!!!
Nice work gyani ji..Not all posses the power of jotting their feelings in poetry..By the way the last line needs a correction I guess,though may b I got it wrong but it must be jawab de do 'meri' nazar se I think
Post a Comment